I have an interview today. It may sound like an ordinary thing but for me it is a small victory. It is pretty grim out there and it is hard not to get depressed by it. I know, however, that I will eventually get back to work because I need to.
You would think that I would have more time to write, being unemployed and all. However, I have found that between sending out resumes and taking care of things around the house that have been put off for so long, I actually have very little time to write.
I have made some progress on Chapter 9 of 'Double or Nothing' and it will most likely end up being a long chapter. Chapter 11 of 'Summer Training' has been started as well and I am eager to get back to it.
I am planning to transcribe more of 'The Care and Treatment. . .' soon.
Take care and play safe
T.S.
星期二, 八月 23, 2011
星期五, 八月 19, 2011
Chapter 6 of 'Double or Nothing' Sent Out For Posting
I have sent out chapter 6 of 'Double or Nothing' for posting today and you should be seeing it on your favorite website soon. I have also made progress on chapter 9 of the same story.
星期二, 八月 16, 2011
Summer Training Chapter 6 Sent For Posting
Chapter 6 of 'Summer Training' has been sent out for posting and should be posted on various websites in the near future. If you were someone that has asked to be on the new mailing list, you should be receiving a copy of chapter 6 in your e-mail. If you were asked to be on that list and did not receive it, please let me know. Sending out chapters is not going to be a regular thing, but I may do it once in awhile. There might also be exclusive content.
Take care and play safe,
T.S.
Take care and play safe,
T.S.
星期日, 八月 14, 2011
Chapter 8 of 'Double. . .'
Chapter 8 of 'Double Or Nothing' has just been completed and soon I'll start on Chapter 9. I am trying to catch up with 'Summer Training' chapterwise since they are parallel stories. Proofing is going well on chapter 6 of both 'Double or Nothing' and 'Summer Training' so hopefully I should be able to post soon.
A few poeple have sent me their e-mail addresses for the newsletter. I hope to get the first one out when I post the new chapters next week. This list is strating from scratch, so if you were on my list in the past doesn't mean it will transfer over.
Take care and play safe,
T.S.
A few poeple have sent me their e-mail addresses for the newsletter. I hope to get the first one out when I post the new chapters next week. This list is strating from scratch, so if you were on my list in the past doesn't mean it will transfer over.
Take care and play safe,
T.S.
星期四, 八月 11, 2011
Ladies and Gentlemen, Start Your Emails. . .
After some thought, I have decided to start accepting requests for the newsletter emails. If you would like to be on that list, please e-mail me at fesseln1@aol.com. I will start to collect them into a folder for e-mailing.
Take care and play safe,
T.S.
Take care and play safe,
T.S.
星期一, 八月 08, 2011
The Mailing List
I have been giving the Fesseln's Fiction mailing list some thought as to content and such and I have come up with what I think can be accomplished. First off, readers on the mailing list will be notified when I send out a story to post. I am hesitant in mailing the actual chapters/stories because of obligations to the sites I post at.
I may also do exclusive peeks and/or short stories to readers on the list.
I intend to keep the list private.
If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to e-mail me or post them here. I will most likely start the new list at the end of the month.
Take care and play safe
T.S.
I may also do exclusive peeks and/or short stories to readers on the list.
I intend to keep the list private.
If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to e-mail me or post them here. I will most likely start the new list at the end of the month.
Take care and play safe
T.S.
星期日, 八月 07, 2011
A Little Progress
I have started getting a few edits back from my trusted volunteers and have started going over Chapter 6 of both 'Double or Nothing' and 'Summer Training'. I hope to have them sent for posting in the next week or two, depending on time.
On a personal note, things here are a bit trying so here is my shameless plug for 'Summer Project'. If you can afford it, please purchase an e-book copy of it. I have posted all the chapters on several websites because I promised you that I would. But if you can afford the $6.00 or so to purchase a copy, please do. However, if you can't afford it, that is okay to. I understand completely.
That's it for now. Take care and play safe
On a personal note, things here are a bit trying so here is my shameless plug for 'Summer Project'. If you can afford it, please purchase an e-book copy of it. I have posted all the chapters on several websites because I promised you that I would. But if you can afford the $6.00 or so to purchase a copy, please do. However, if you can't afford it, that is okay to. I understand completely.
That's it for now. Take care and play safe
星期五, 八月 05, 2011
My Real E-mail Address
My real e-mail address is fesseln1@aol.com. Sorry for any confusion. If you are interested in proofreading, please e-mail me there.
星期四, 八月 04, 2011
Volunteers. . .
Greetings,
I has been a hard summer already and it looks like it isn't going to get any easier. I haven't hears from my regular proof-reader yet. I know he is now employed and may have alot on his plate. That being said, I am looking for a couple of people serious about helping me write better. . .that is catch the errors that seem to elude my eyes.
I cannot pay anyone however you will get to see the chapters before anyone else. IF you are interested, please email me and fesseln1@aol.com
Take care and play safe.
I has been a hard summer already and it looks like it isn't going to get any easier. I haven't hears from my regular proof-reader yet. I know he is now employed and may have alot on his plate. That being said, I am looking for a couple of people serious about helping me write better. . .that is catch the errors that seem to elude my eyes.
I cannot pay anyone however you will get to see the chapters before anyone else. IF you are interested, please email me and fesseln1@aol.com
Take care and play safe.
星期日, 七月 31, 2011
Summer Training Chapter 5
Greetings
Chapter 5 of 'Summer Training' has finally been edited and has been sent out for posting on various different websites. It should be posted soon. Hopefully I will get around to editing chapter 6 of both 'Double or Nothing' and 'Summer Training' soon.
As for email notifications. I have given some thought on how I want to proceed but I would like your input on what would you like in the email. Please let me know so I can satisfy your wants.
Take care and play safe.
T.S.
Chapter 5 of 'Summer Training' has finally been edited and has been sent out for posting on various different websites. It should be posted soon. Hopefully I will get around to editing chapter 6 of both 'Double or Nothing' and 'Summer Training' soon.
As for email notifications. I have given some thought on how I want to proceed but I would like your input on what would you like in the email. Please let me know so I can satisfy your wants.
Take care and play safe.
T.S.
星期四, 七月 28, 2011
Double or Nothing Chapter 5
Greetings
Chapter 5 of Double Or Nothing has been sent out for postings on various websites, so you should be seeing it shortly. I plan on working on 'Summer Training' in the next few days.
Take care and play safe
T.S.
Chapter 5 of Double Or Nothing has been sent out for postings on various websites, so you should be seeing it shortly. I plan on working on 'Summer Training' in the next few days.
Take care and play safe
T.S.
星期一, 七月 25, 2011
Apologies. . .
Greetings,
I want to say I am sorry for not keeping up with my postings and such. There has been a great many changes in my life including being out-of-work. I have been devoting much of my time seeking a job in my corner of the world and it has been rather grim. I am hoping to get to some much needed editing here shortly. Chapter 5 of 'Double Or Nothing' is nearly done in terms of editing and I hope to go on to 'Summer Training'. I will also add some more transcripts of Dr. Brand's book 'The Care and Treatment of Particularly Fair Women'.
Take care everyone and play safe.
I want to say I am sorry for not keeping up with my postings and such. There has been a great many changes in my life including being out-of-work. I have been devoting much of my time seeking a job in my corner of the world and it has been rather grim. I am hoping to get to some much needed editing here shortly. Chapter 5 of 'Double Or Nothing' is nearly done in terms of editing and I hope to go on to 'Summer Training'. I will also add some more transcripts of Dr. Brand's book 'The Care and Treatment of Particularly Fair Women'.
Take care everyone and play safe.
星期三, 六月 08, 2011
Poll
Opps, I forgot to mention my mailing list poll. Please spend a couple of seconds to answer it. Thank you.
What's Going On. . .
In the past few weeks, I have done little or no writing. Life has once again gotten in the way of trying to find time to write. I am hoping this weekend to proof chapter 5 of both 'Summer Training' and 'Double Or Nothing' to get them prepped for posting. I also plan on sending out chapter 6 of both to my proofreader.
If you haven't noticed, there is a new page on my blog: 'The Care and Treatment of Particularly Fair Women'. I will transcribe the manual as time allows for your enjoyment.
Take care and play safe
T.S.
If you haven't noticed, there is a new page on my blog: 'The Care and Treatment of Particularly Fair Women'. I will transcribe the manual as time allows for your enjoyment.
Take care and play safe
T.S.
星期六, 五月 14, 2011
Both Chapters 4
I am planning on posting both chapter 4 of 'Summer Training' and chapter 4 of Double Or Nothing' this Sunday. How long it takes to get on various websites is dependant on the host site so please be patient.
It is a grey and soggy Saturday here and I have been driven indoors to do my chores that need to be done under the watchful eyes of my cats. Perhaps I will get a chance to write later.
Take care everyone and play safe.
T.S.
It is a grey and soggy Saturday here and I have been driven indoors to do my chores that need to be done under the watchful eyes of my cats. Perhaps I will get a chance to write later.
Take care everyone and play safe.
T.S.
星期四, 五月 05, 2011
'Summer Training' Progress
'Summer Training' is going very well and I have started writing chapter 11. I am so far pleased with the progress of the story so far though it took more chapters than anticipated to get where I needed to be. With that being said, I will be working on 'Double Or Nothing' again to bring it current with 'Summer Training'.
I have read many of the reviews you have written on various websites and thank you. There have been several suggestions about content that I have taken to heart, especially when it come to Jeffery's character.
Chapters 3 of both 'Summer Training' and 'Double Or Nothing' are starting to be posted on various websites.
Take care and play safe
T.S.
I have read many of the reviews you have written on various websites and thank you. There have been several suggestions about content that I have taken to heart, especially when it come to Jeffery's character.
Chapters 3 of both 'Summer Training' and 'Double Or Nothing' are starting to be posted on various websites.
Take care and play safe
T.S.
星期五, 四月 29, 2011
Want more?
I should be sending out for posting chapter 3 from both 'Summer Training' and 'Double Or Nothing'. I am hoping for a somewhat quiet weekend to write but you never know around here.
A bondage model posted on the Yahoo group Rope_Dreams about why she became a bondage model and what the fetish means to her. It was very well written and I hope to get permission to repost it here. In the meantime, if you are interested, you can find it in adult Yahoo groups.
As for me, I guess why bondage appeals to me is I am somewhat of a control freak and being teased by girls in Junior High fueled fantasies of revenge with rope. When I left the nest and went to college, I slowly became aware of many other people with like intrests. More importantly, any serious relationship I was in, the girl was not oppossed to being bound during love-making. In fact, my first 'bondage expierence' was at the behest of my girlfriend at the time.
If any of you want to share your thoughts on this, please feel free to post them here.
take care and play safe
T.S.
A bondage model posted on the Yahoo group Rope_Dreams about why she became a bondage model and what the fetish means to her. It was very well written and I hope to get permission to repost it here. In the meantime, if you are interested, you can find it in adult Yahoo groups.
As for me, I guess why bondage appeals to me is I am somewhat of a control freak and being teased by girls in Junior High fueled fantasies of revenge with rope. When I left the nest and went to college, I slowly became aware of many other people with like intrests. More importantly, any serious relationship I was in, the girl was not oppossed to being bound during love-making. In fact, my first 'bondage expierence' was at the behest of my girlfriend at the time.
If any of you want to share your thoughts on this, please feel free to post them here.
take care and play safe
T.S.
星期日, 四月 17, 2011
Hunt
HUNT
T.S. FESSELN
Disclaimer: This is a work of amatory fantasy. Any resemblance to people living or dead is purely coincidental. If you are under the age of 18, please stop reading here. If you are a bit squeamish about graphic depictions of sex and bondage, please stop reading here. The author takes no responsibility for those who wish to reenact anything written below. Permission is granted for private use. The author wishes any agencies that wish to publish this work, to please contact him at FESSELN1@aol.com. Or visit his weblog at http://fesselnsfiction.blogspot.com/ . Any comments are gladly accepted and encouraged.
Erin stood out in their backyard, her skin flushed red from embarrassment. She was dressed in the skimpiest ‘bunny’ costume she had ever seen; a white, fishnet teddy with a white bunny ears headband, white nylon stockings and an uncomfortable fluffy little cottontail. But the costume was the least of her worries. Also part of her costume was a pair of white leather cuffs around her ankles, another pair of cuffs holding her wrists behind her back, a white leather collar and a neon pink ballgag fastened tightly in her mouth.
It wasn’t that Erin didn’t look stunning in her costume. She did. She kept her five foot frame trim by working out every week at the gym with her husband Kyle. She had a nice pair of C-cup breasts and a well rounded ass. Her auburn hair was kept in a cute pageboy cute and her blue-green cat-like eyes made her look almost pixie-like. She didn’t mind turning heads, just not like this.
Her husband Kyle stood on the porch and waved at her. He was holding the remote that would activate the small egg vibrator inside her. He was still dressed in his flannel drawers and red plaid robe. He wasn’t much taller than Erin was, but he was a bit stockier in build. His blondish hair was still in spiky mess from last night and his brown eyes almost sparkled with mischief. He sipped casually at his mug of morning coffee and grinned.
The game was simple. It was a version of ‘hotter-colder’. The closer she got to where a colored egg was hidden, the lower her vibe would hum. He had told her that there were more than three dozen plastic Easter eggs hidden in their fenced-in back yard. Only one would fit the lock that would open the back garage door and let her inside.
The egg vibrator inside her roared on and caused a rush of pleasure to gush through her. The game was on.
“Oh, by the way honey,” Kyle said as Erin looked around to spot some spot of color, “If you happen to cum while back here, you’re spending the rest of the day in back like you are.”
Erin moaned her protests but she knew they fell on deaf ears. She focused her attentions on finding the eggs.
There were a few eggs she spotted right away in their tulip beds and she hopped the best she could over to them. Kyle at least had the decency to let her wear her sneakers.
As she jumped, Erin’s tail was becoming erotically uncomfortable. She didn’t know where he had got it, but the little ball of fluff on her ass was attached to a slender plug in her ass. With every hop, she could feel both the vibrator and the anal plug moving inside her, causing more ripples of bliss.
The vibrator slowed and then stopped as she reached the raised bed where the tulips had already started to bud and blossom. She sat herself down on the bed’s brick wall, making she her tail wasn’t going to impale her some more, and reached around and picked up the egg, shaking it.
“Honey,” Kyle called, “You might want to open it just to make sure.”
Erin grunted and rolled her eyes upward. She struggled to open the egg and finally when it was opened, she saw the reason why. Her husband had suspended in some gelatin a penny inside. He had first filled half the egg, put the coin in, drilled a small hole in the top of the egg and after it was fastened together, he filled the rest of the egg with the same gelatin.
Damn him.
She scooted down a little further to a blue egg and again, found a penny floating in the clear gelatin. She found two other eggs in the bed before her vibrator started to buzz vigorously again.
As Erin got up to hop towards the lilacs planted along their tall wooden fence, she thought back to last night and how this started so innocently. Kyle had said that he had a surprise for her this Easter and if she wanted it, she would have to do as he said. Erin reluctantly agreed, knowing that it would probably involve some sort of bondage. They had been into it even before they got married and their fascination with leather and rope never went away. In fact, they both came up with new ways in which to play their games.
A wave of rapture flooded through Erin and she had to stop. She was sure that Kyle had heard her, if not the neighbors next door. It was still very early in the morning and she hoped to find the key before it became too late.
A few more hops along the blossoming lilacs, the vibrator slowed. Erin thanked God, since she didn’t know if she could have staved off an orgasm. As it was, it continued to tease her, keeping her kettle warm.
She saw the purple egg and her humming companion stopped. Awkwardly, she squatted down a retrieved the egg, only to find another penny.
As Kyle watched his wife hopping around the yard searching, his morning boner continued to ache. It had never gone away. From the moment he got out of bed and presented his wife with her ‘Easter Best’ to when she came out of the bathroom wearing it to watching her struggling to find the key before she gave in to her passion, his erection never fully went away. All he really wanted to do is carry her inside and make love to her.
However, he didn’t dare do it. That was the deliciousness of their games. The Waiting and wanting made the ending that much more intense.
His wife hopped away from the lilacs and he cranked the vibrator on high.
Erin stopped, swooning as another billow of bliss ballooned within her. The pleasure swelled and stormed as she bit into her gag hard as she moaned. Like a head of steam, her passion continued to build and threatened to engulf her and she knew it would if she didn’t get hopping.
The ebb and flow of the vibrators ministrations continued to keep Erin on edge as she searched. To her dismay, she found the some of the eggs were camouflaged and blended in with the lawn and foliage. She had meant to keep track of the eggs she found but she soon gave up. Her ever growing need clouded her thinking.
She was hopping out in the middle of the lawn when she kicked an egg and the vibrator stopped. She knelt again and opened he green mottled egg. In there was the key. Quickly she rubbed the gel off, smiling around her gag.
Just then he turned the vibrator on high.
The blistering-hot ecstasy exploded with in her and she collapsed on the grass and writhed as the pleasure completely engulfed her. She bucked and screamed and contorted herself as her rapture tormented her again and again until she was too weak to do much else than drool and moan. When her vibrator stopped, she opened her eyes to find her husband standing over her.
“Now that you have the key, honey, I’ll be waiting for you inside. There is another treat that I need to put in your basket and it can’t wait too much longer.”
Erin watched her husband walk back to the house, open the sliding glass door and locking it after him. Weakly she uncoiled herself and with difficulty, got back on her feet. Still holding the key, she hopped towards the garage. This was one treat she really didn’t want to miss.
If you enjoyed this story and would like to see more of my writings, please e-mail me at FESSELN1@aol.com. , visit my weblog at http://fesselnsfiction.blogspot.com/ or follow my latest updates on Twitter. Any and all comments are welcomed and appreciated.
T.S. FESSELN
Disclaimer: This is a work of amatory fantasy. Any resemblance to people living or dead is purely coincidental. If you are under the age of 18, please stop reading here. If you are a bit squeamish about graphic depictions of sex and bondage, please stop reading here. The author takes no responsibility for those who wish to reenact anything written below. Permission is granted for private use. The author wishes any agencies that wish to publish this work, to please contact him at FESSELN1@aol.com. Or visit his weblog at http://fesselnsfiction.blogspot.com/ . Any comments are gladly accepted and encouraged.
Erin stood out in their backyard, her skin flushed red from embarrassment. She was dressed in the skimpiest ‘bunny’ costume she had ever seen; a white, fishnet teddy with a white bunny ears headband, white nylon stockings and an uncomfortable fluffy little cottontail. But the costume was the least of her worries. Also part of her costume was a pair of white leather cuffs around her ankles, another pair of cuffs holding her wrists behind her back, a white leather collar and a neon pink ballgag fastened tightly in her mouth.
It wasn’t that Erin didn’t look stunning in her costume. She did. She kept her five foot frame trim by working out every week at the gym with her husband Kyle. She had a nice pair of C-cup breasts and a well rounded ass. Her auburn hair was kept in a cute pageboy cute and her blue-green cat-like eyes made her look almost pixie-like. She didn’t mind turning heads, just not like this.
Her husband Kyle stood on the porch and waved at her. He was holding the remote that would activate the small egg vibrator inside her. He was still dressed in his flannel drawers and red plaid robe. He wasn’t much taller than Erin was, but he was a bit stockier in build. His blondish hair was still in spiky mess from last night and his brown eyes almost sparkled with mischief. He sipped casually at his mug of morning coffee and grinned.
The game was simple. It was a version of ‘hotter-colder’. The closer she got to where a colored egg was hidden, the lower her vibe would hum. He had told her that there were more than three dozen plastic Easter eggs hidden in their fenced-in back yard. Only one would fit the lock that would open the back garage door and let her inside.
The egg vibrator inside her roared on and caused a rush of pleasure to gush through her. The game was on.
“Oh, by the way honey,” Kyle said as Erin looked around to spot some spot of color, “If you happen to cum while back here, you’re spending the rest of the day in back like you are.”
Erin moaned her protests but she knew they fell on deaf ears. She focused her attentions on finding the eggs.
There were a few eggs she spotted right away in their tulip beds and she hopped the best she could over to them. Kyle at least had the decency to let her wear her sneakers.
As she jumped, Erin’s tail was becoming erotically uncomfortable. She didn’t know where he had got it, but the little ball of fluff on her ass was attached to a slender plug in her ass. With every hop, she could feel both the vibrator and the anal plug moving inside her, causing more ripples of bliss.
The vibrator slowed and then stopped as she reached the raised bed where the tulips had already started to bud and blossom. She sat herself down on the bed’s brick wall, making she her tail wasn’t going to impale her some more, and reached around and picked up the egg, shaking it.
“Honey,” Kyle called, “You might want to open it just to make sure.”
Erin grunted and rolled her eyes upward. She struggled to open the egg and finally when it was opened, she saw the reason why. Her husband had suspended in some gelatin a penny inside. He had first filled half the egg, put the coin in, drilled a small hole in the top of the egg and after it was fastened together, he filled the rest of the egg with the same gelatin.
Damn him.
She scooted down a little further to a blue egg and again, found a penny floating in the clear gelatin. She found two other eggs in the bed before her vibrator started to buzz vigorously again.
As Erin got up to hop towards the lilacs planted along their tall wooden fence, she thought back to last night and how this started so innocently. Kyle had said that he had a surprise for her this Easter and if she wanted it, she would have to do as he said. Erin reluctantly agreed, knowing that it would probably involve some sort of bondage. They had been into it even before they got married and their fascination with leather and rope never went away. In fact, they both came up with new ways in which to play their games.
A wave of rapture flooded through Erin and she had to stop. She was sure that Kyle had heard her, if not the neighbors next door. It was still very early in the morning and she hoped to find the key before it became too late.
A few more hops along the blossoming lilacs, the vibrator slowed. Erin thanked God, since she didn’t know if she could have staved off an orgasm. As it was, it continued to tease her, keeping her kettle warm.
She saw the purple egg and her humming companion stopped. Awkwardly, she squatted down a retrieved the egg, only to find another penny.
As Kyle watched his wife hopping around the yard searching, his morning boner continued to ache. It had never gone away. From the moment he got out of bed and presented his wife with her ‘Easter Best’ to when she came out of the bathroom wearing it to watching her struggling to find the key before she gave in to her passion, his erection never fully went away. All he really wanted to do is carry her inside and make love to her.
However, he didn’t dare do it. That was the deliciousness of their games. The Waiting and wanting made the ending that much more intense.
His wife hopped away from the lilacs and he cranked the vibrator on high.
Erin stopped, swooning as another billow of bliss ballooned within her. The pleasure swelled and stormed as she bit into her gag hard as she moaned. Like a head of steam, her passion continued to build and threatened to engulf her and she knew it would if she didn’t get hopping.
The ebb and flow of the vibrators ministrations continued to keep Erin on edge as she searched. To her dismay, she found the some of the eggs were camouflaged and blended in with the lawn and foliage. She had meant to keep track of the eggs she found but she soon gave up. Her ever growing need clouded her thinking.
She was hopping out in the middle of the lawn when she kicked an egg and the vibrator stopped. She knelt again and opened he green mottled egg. In there was the key. Quickly she rubbed the gel off, smiling around her gag.
Just then he turned the vibrator on high.
The blistering-hot ecstasy exploded with in her and she collapsed on the grass and writhed as the pleasure completely engulfed her. She bucked and screamed and contorted herself as her rapture tormented her again and again until she was too weak to do much else than drool and moan. When her vibrator stopped, she opened her eyes to find her husband standing over her.
“Now that you have the key, honey, I’ll be waiting for you inside. There is another treat that I need to put in your basket and it can’t wait too much longer.”
Erin watched her husband walk back to the house, open the sliding glass door and locking it after him. Weakly she uncoiled herself and with difficulty, got back on her feet. Still holding the key, she hopped towards the garage. This was one treat she really didn’t want to miss.
If you enjoyed this story and would like to see more of my writings, please e-mail me at FESSELN1@aol.com. , visit my weblog at http://fesselnsfiction.blogspot.com/ or follow my latest updates on Twitter. Any and all comments are welcomed and appreciated.
星期六, 四月 16, 2011
Taxing. . .
It has been a stress filled week for a variety of reasons that I will not get into. However, he weekend is finally here and I am going to try to get some writing in. I find it is a great stress reliever. I need to polish up several chapters of both 'Summer Training' and 'Double Or Nothing'. My Easter tale 'Hunt' has started to show on several websites. I also plan on posting it Sunday on this blog. One of my problems is I think I have hit the wall in terms of describing an orgasm. I have tried a plethora of metaphors and it seems to me I am just redoing them again and again. I anyone out there has any suggestions or comments, please let me know via e-mail or comments here. That's it for now. Please play safe. T.S.
星期四, 四月 07, 2011
A Look Into Some Twisted Gray Matter (and other things)
Every once in awhile, I like to give readers a glimpse in how I work (I know, pretty scary). One of the most important ways I approach a story is how to describe it. The way I view myself is that I am a motion picture camera, trying to capture everything in the scene that is important and giving the reader a sense of place. For instance, I have a mental blueprint of Jeffery and Stephanie's parents house. I know the layout, the furniture, the decor. I try to express that in words without detracting from the story itself. I know that I am not always successful but I hope that readers get a sense of the place as well. I am working on Chapters 7 and 8 of 'Summer Training'. What I had pictured taking up 1 to 2 chapters, is now running into 4. I have had some contenuity issues that I have had to correct, but I think the end product is going to be great. I still plan to release a chapter a month, but that might change if I get enough material written and proofed. Someone has graciously offered to proof 'On French Soil'. I know it is a massive undertaking and I hope (again) to get another chapter done for it. So until next time, play safe T.S.
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